Gotta Go Fast
September 16th, 2014, 9:31 am
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September 16th, 2014, 7:41 amReply
Good News, Everyone!
As it turns out, the entire arm debacle wasn't as serious as I thought. The ER doctors don't really know what they're talking about, and the fracture - I fractured my left elbow - wasn't even that bad. The doctor I saw yesterday wants me moving my arm often and frequently to get as much normal movement restored as possible, not to mention the sheer speed of my recovery process so far actually left him stunned. In fact if it weren't for the fact that it still hurts if I try and straighten it too much or move it too quickly I'd think it wasn't broken at all. So that means I can make updates and stuff again, and I won't use a little thing like a minor fracture as an excuse to slack off.
=END OF WORLD  REVISIT=
...I'm gonna chalk Két being able to snag that up to her phantom thief tendencies and Metal not expecting her to be able to be able to move that fast. This revisit actually originally had Két going toe-to-toe with Metal, but revisions and actually thinking about it for two seconds made me realize how dumb that would have been. Even if Két were to use her wall-powers to keep a step ahead of him, she'd probably be able to fight him to a standstill at best. Not to mention she's just finished recovering from, y'know, BLAIR, and it is part of her character that she prefers avoiding fights when possible, partly because people ask questions when she does fight and partly because she doesn't have much confidence in her combat abilities. Having Két go toe to toe with Metal, who's basically Sonic only cooler and a robot, not to mention he's probably still got data on techniques copied from Heroes and him using that copy power on Két would be disastrous, would have just been asking for trouble. Realistically, I'd have to stretch boundaries, maybe literally, to have Két be able to match up to Metal in anything but a battle of wits- it's rather telling that "stall until backup arrives" was the objective of this world from the beginning (the 'get the Chaos Emerald away from Metal' was added when I realized where in the script I was).
TL;DR, originally Két was gonna fight Metal until Sonic showed up, I decided no she's too weak for that so she gets to stall the robutt until Sonic, Shadow and Rouge arrive instead.
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September 16th, 2014, 12:25 pmReply
@Shard: Would you do a revisit of World , please? this sounds like a good idea considering it's the second canon world as well as the second world she visited.
(Also, if you can do Sonic, Kirby and Digimon, why not Mario, Pokemon, Zelda and Megaman?).
Also, I'm glad your elbow is almost back to normal.
September 16th, 2014, 1:14 pmReply
@Extremmefan- That's exactly the problem - there's such a major height difference between Két's Pop-Star form and King Dedede that I'd have to experiment to see how I could fit them into the same panels. Though if I decide to revisit World  I'll figure something out.
September 16th, 2014, 2:06 pmReply
@Extremmefan- There's also a few more worlds planned - the one directly after this one is only a few pages, but once that's done there's at least 4 worlds to get through before I can even think about revisiting Pop Star.
I'll let you in on a secret, though, at least one of them is one of the things you suggested ;3
September 17th, 2014, 2:49 amReply
@BuddyT- LET'S GO, BACK TO THE BIG BANG
@AkumaTh- I am the worst at writing fights World  is gonna be a nightmare I'm just saving all the fight for then that is how things are gonna go down I'm not gonna wear myself out with fighting now
@Miyto- I think my body's just so tired of being sick it's like "NO I DON'T CARE HOW BROKEN YOUR ARM IS GET BETTER NOW"
September 18th, 2014, 4:05 amReply
@RoninHunt0987- *insert teleporting sound effect here-* wait, does she even make a sound when she goes between worlds? Logic indicates that sounds happen when things go whoosh but in World  when she was whooshing there was no indication that Yamaha heard anything, plus I'd probably have put a sound effect in if she made a whoosh WHY DIDN'T I FIGURE THIS OUT